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Poems for children in need
Posted: Nov 16, 2017 by: Year Five (Year5) on: Year 5
star poem,
stars and mars
silver bars they, do not shine
like star candy
stars make people
fall a sleep from there
twinkling and flashing light
all night.
I hope u enjoyed it,but it was kind of a short poem
byeee
Poem is by:Zara jawish
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Year F.
Nov 16, 2017
I really liked your poem it is demi by the way =) it is really good =) |