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PENGUINS (by demi-leigh)
Posted: Nov 16, 2017 by: Year Five (Year5) on: Year 5
Icy and cold
Living with the poler bears
With fluffy feathers
Big round eyes
Sliding on there bellys
Living in there icy places
Not being able to fly
Splashing in the cold water
Covered in fluffy feathers
Hours of fun for the cute animals
Sliding and sliping
Gliding through the snow
Playing with there freinds
As the night awake the penguins sleep
Hope you like my poem =)
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Year F.
Nov 16, 2017
OMG i love your poem |
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Year F.
Nov 16, 2017
i liked it |