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Colourful Birds /by Sandra
Posted: Nov 16, 2017 by: Year Five (Year5) on: Year 5
Colourful Birds flying in the sky
Colourful Birds having some pie
Colourful Birds shining in the sky ready to fly
When you step outside
And look up high
You can see colourful birds flying in the sky
There feathers are as colourful as the rainbow
And claws as sharp as knifes
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Paige P.
Nov 23, 2017
I love your rambow poem it is really good and very colourful |