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Emotions by archie
Posted: Nov 16, 2017 by: Year Five (Year5) on: Year 5
Emotions By Archie
Happy and sad,
Annoying and mad,
Bad and good,
Ow somethings hurting...
Its blood
When i'm happy I Run and skip
When i'm mad I won't eat a chip
When i'm annoyed i run and slip
When i'm annoyed i locked my self inside too
What would you do? (Comment what you'd do also add your name at the end)
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Maciej W.
Nov 23, 2017
I would tell the teacher, easy |
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Year F.
Nov 16, 2017
Thank you -Archie |
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Year F.
Nov 16, 2017
I love that poem. James |
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Year F.
Nov 16, 2017
This is a very good poem and it made me laugh by Imogen. |
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test c.
Nov 16, 2017
I would hit every one Ashdon |
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Year F.
Nov 16, 2017
This is a very good poem it made me laugh |