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The penguins by Imogen
Posted: Nov 16, 2017 by: Year Five (Year5) on: Year 5
Penguin penguin so cute and fluffly
Penguins have big floppy feet to make them trip.
Penguin like to slide and slip dive and hit.
Penguin love swimming and dancing on the icy floor.
Penguins are mad penguins sad .
Penguins just want to have fun.
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Chloe B.
Nov 23, 2017
That is really good, and like Nicholas said, good descriptive words |
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Nicholas M.
Nov 23, 2017
good poem i like your descriptive words |
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Year F.
Nov 17, 2017
Good. |