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My own poem by James
Posted: Nov 16, 2017 by: Year Five (Year5) on: Year 5
The red red poppies
The red red poppies,grow and grow,they stay there everyday,off to show.
The brave brave soldiers,fought everyday,they are now in their grave,now all they do is pray and pray.
The good good people,buy the poppies,the money goes off to charity,now we think to make us happy.
The green green grass,is where the poppies lay,it's in the cemetary, and that's where they stay.
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Archie T.
Nov 23, 2017
+ The good rhyming words ? How long did this take you? -> you could have made more rows |