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Stars /by Sandra
Posted: Nov 16, 2017 by: Year Five (Year5) on: Year 5
A star is brighter than the sun
It shines in the dark sky
It is a s beautiful as ever
Up high
Were the stars shine
Like diamonds in the sky
Glowing up high
Sparkling and shimmering
Illunating the world
Just like a star would do
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Callum B.
Nov 23, 2017
You are really good at poems |
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Ivan V.
Nov 23, 2017
goods work that was the best poem i've seen |
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Paige P.
Nov 23, 2017
your poem is really good and it is very calm and relaxing |
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Emma P.
Nov 23, 2017
Amazing poem i love the rhyming words. |
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Year F.
Nov 16, 2017
Good work Sandra, It's me Bianca :) |