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Nutella Poem
Posted: Nov 17, 2017 by: Year Five (Year5) on: Year 5
When you are on my spoon, I want to eat
You look so yummy
You are so sweet
Just get me some more
And then I'll leave
I love Nutella,
And so should you!
If you do not,
DON'T TALK TO ME!
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Phoebe W.
Nov 23, 2017
Sooooooo coooooool Bianca :):):):)::)):):)) |
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Phoebe W.
Nov 23, 2017
Sooooooo coooooool Bianca :):):):)::)):):)) |
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Chloe B.
Nov 23, 2017
Funny-you could do more because it was good and a lot of people like it, well done! |
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Amelia M.
Nov 23, 2017
I like your poem,very funny! I love nutella |
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Amelia M.
Nov 23, 2017
I like your poem,very funny! I love nutella |
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Paige P.
Nov 23, 2017
WOW how many coments on this one must be popular just because it is nutella #nutella is good and well done bianca haha |
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Ivan V.
Nov 23, 2017
I've got to admit that is a poem that is rich well done |
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Makenzie M.
Nov 23, 2017
I like nutela and it is funny and yummy |
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Demi-Leigh E.
Nov 23, 2017
#NUTELLA Lol |
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Emma P.
Nov 23, 2017
I love your poem it made me laugh hahahahahaha . |