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Stars by Ivan
Posted: Nov 23, 2017 by: Ivan Veiga (ivanv19) on: Year 5
Stars are very far.
I want to go to Mars and see the star.
I am going to see the stars.
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Zara A.
Nov 23, 2017
Ok ivan told me to comment on this lol |
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Maciej W.
Nov 23, 2017
+I like it as I want to see the stars |
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Bianca M.
Nov 23, 2017
Very good, Ivan, but make it longer... someday. |