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Winter /by Sandra
Posted: Nov 23, 2017 by: Sandra Kowalczuk (sandrak19) on: Year 5
The soft white snow falls on the wet ground.
When you step on the freezing cold ice.
You feel like an ice cube.
Snowflakes are as crunchy as the leaves.
The world is ready to freeze
Be careful or your feet might freeze
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Callum B.
Feb 7, 2018
I really like your poem |