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A poem about unicorns.
Posted: Nov 23, 2017 by: Emma Purchon (emmap19) on: Year 5
Where is the unicorn?
Where did she go?
With her silver horn.
With her mane of snow.
She wonders around
with her bobbing bow.
She listens to the birds
galloping up and down
as she wonders into town.
8 comments
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Paige P.
Nov 23, 2017
Your poem is really good and I love unicorns and Ivan does not like unicons even though they are so cute #unicorns are fluffy |
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Maciej W.
Nov 23, 2017
Unicorns are fluffy!!! Well done. |
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Chloe B.
Nov 23, 2017
I don't like your comment never mind and unicorns. |
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Ashdon W.
Nov 23, 2017
I love unicorns they are great |
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Ivan V.
Nov 23, 2017
But it is good. |
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Sandra K.
Nov 23, 2017
That is a really good poem. It is also kind of funny. |
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Ivan V.
Nov 23, 2017
I don't like unciorn. |