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Christmas poem
Posted: Nov 23, 2017 by: Archie Twentyman (archiet19) on: Year 5
Christmas pudding
Christmas Presents
You start opening
At the night time crescent
He comes down chimney
Some people Hymn (Sing a song about god)
The man named Santa
probably drinks Fanta
He probably got lots of banta!
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Archie T.
Nov 23, 2017
Thanks. |
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James C.
Nov 23, 2017
I really like your poem Archie. |
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Demi-Leigh E.
Nov 23, 2017
No i think he likes cola more than Fanta lol but i get how you wanted it to rhyme |