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unicorn poem!!!!
Posted: Feb 7, 2018 by: Chloe Bayliss (chloeb19) on: Year 5
beautiful bow,
she has hoofs instead of toes,
she ponders around,
but she makes not sound,
her mane so glittery,
her eyes are so flittery,
she is so rare,
and she always cares!!!!!!!!!
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Tia W.
Feb 15, 2018
You should use capital letters and full stops more please and then it would be perfect! |